朗思C1写作信件类高分技巧及范文模板,告别写作无思路!

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朗思C1写作

作文题目

Your close friend has been experiencing tension with their parents and is contemplating leaving home and renting an apartment with roommates. Write an email to your friend, assessing the current situation and offering your perspective on the most suitable course

of action.


Outline the pros and cons of living independently, and give your opinion on the best solution for your friend. Additionally, express your support and willingness to assist your friend in any way you can. 

Write between 250 and 300 words.

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题目解析


通读题目,从Write an email to your friend可以得出,这是一份要写给朋友的书信。首先理解题干中的重要信息,你的朋友和父母之间有冲突,这是写作的关键。接下来按照题目要求要对朋友的情况进行评估从而给出他是否应该搬出父母家,搬走的话给出怎么做的建议,不搬走的话给出该怎么和父母把问题妥善解决的建议。

具体观点思路描述如下:

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高分观点


●题目要求文章类型为信件+议论

●主体段必须包含对题干问题1表明自己对于朋友要离家出走的这件事情的态度

●主体段必须包含对题干问题2说明自己为什么支持或者不支持同学离家出走主体段

●要求字数不低于二百五十字的要求

●要求结构符合逻辑,开头写出写作目的表明观点,主体段针对题目的要求进行阐述和论述结尾简单总结

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观点思路


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范文解析


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范文举例


Dear Grace,


This is XXX. | have heard that you have argued with your parents and are going to move out to share a house with friends. (交代写信的背景,朋友与父母发生了矛盾) From my perspective (角度) , I completely agree with you. The reasons are as follows. (从自身角度出发更能与朋友发生共鸣)


First and foremost, as we grow up, the mind between parents and us is starting to diverge (分歧) .(支撑自己意见的观点1 ) Admittedly (诚然) , if we live with our parents every day, there is no doubt that it would cause a lot of family conflict (冲突) . In addition, our parents are getting older and older, so as offspring, we are supposed to pay more attention to their physical and mental health. Nevertheless,frequent ( 频繁的) arguments are not conducive to that. Obviously, if we always argue with our parents,it would damage their healthy condition.


Furthermore, in the long run,living with your parents may let you acquire over-reliance both physically and mentally. (支持自己意见的观点2) I would like to stress that we are not teenagers anymore. As a mature adult (成熟的成年人),it is crucial to live independently and solve various problems by ourselves. For instance, if someone who always lives with her parents, it would reduce her chance of dealing with troubles by herself. (这里做举例说明) Besides this, living with parents for a long time will develop a bad habit of over-relying someone else, which means she cannot make some essential decisions on her own. So, these are two main reasons | want to tell you. (做了"观点的延申,进-步说明自己的观点)


However, it is not appropriate to leave your parents in a rage. (这里去对朋友的做法做进一 步的评论) By contrast, I think you should try to peace with your parents to prevent more terrible results. Moreover,you had better talk with them patiently and express your real thoughts. As we all know (众所周知) , even though there is a gap between the older generation and the younger generation, we still need to try to communicate with them. (怎么去解决和父母之间的矛盾)


Yours best,

XXX

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