一篇朗思满分作文--官方解析

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以下是B2级别朗思考试中拿到写作满分（50分）的一篇文章，当然也是王老师自己的学生。

由考官依据评分标准进行了解析。想拿高分的同学们不妨看看，你离写作满分有多远。

同学想问，B2级别朗思作文满分，相当于雅思写作多少分？6.0

题目：

You have a good friend who is studyingand also has a part-

time job. Write him/her a letter giving advice on how tobalance work and study, and say how you could help.

Write between 150 and 200 words.

Hi Tom

You said you had a part-time job. It’s good. But how can you balance your work with your study? It’s not easy. I have several friends who also do part-time jobs. They are now really tired. So I think you should find a way todo both fine.

I hear they say that if you want to both well, you need to do everything very fast. For example, you need time to finish your homework and to do the job, so you can’t spend too much time on either. You need to do things right inthe most efficient way.

Meanwhile, you cannot waste time. You have to use your time wisely. For example, you can’t spend too much time watching short videos or play with videogames.

I hope you can do well in your job and your study. Since I was also thinking about doing a part-time job, I got myself a lot of books about time management. I can send you several. We can learn from the books.

Love

John

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