小荷才露尖尖角丨朗思B1考生范文—话题新颖,结构清晰

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Write a letter to your friend about a book or story you like.Explain why you like it and why he/she should read it too.


Write between 100 and 120 words.


Dear Ben,

I’d love to tell you about my favorite book, which is called Journey to the west. As we know, it is not only one of the greatest ancient Chinese novels, but it is also seen as a well-known and popular story all over the world.
The book is about four monks and the White Dragon Horse.They set up a team and fought against many monsters, although they came from different background. After overcoming numerous difficulties, they got the magic books they needed eventually.
I think you should read it without a doubt. The reasons for my recommendation are as following: 
Firstly, it has many actions but fairly gripping plot, so you will feel really excited. Secondly, it’s a fictional story and is very interesting for kids, which I’m convinced is quite to your taste. Thirdly, you can learn Chinese culture by reading this fiction.
To sum up, I believe that it’s worth to spend your time reading.


 

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Dear Ben,
I’d love to tell you about my favorite book, which is called Journey to the west. As we know, it is not only one of the greatest ancient Chinese novels, but it is also seen as awell-known and popular novel all over the world.
Thebook is about four monks and the White Dragon Horse.They set up   a team and fought against many monsters, although they came from different background. After overcoming various difficulties, they got the magic books they needed eventually.
I think you should read it without a doubt because reasons: (这句话一定要调整,without a doubt 用的特别好,闪闪亮,高分词组,但because reason的用法出现了比较严重的问题。
正确:I think you should read it without a doubt.
The reasons for my recommendation are as below/ following: 
Firstly, it has many actions and plot twists, soyou will feel really excited. Firstly, this work has many movements, therefore they make you feel exited. Secondly, it’s a fictional story, and it was very interesting for kids. I know your favorite stories are fictional story. I know that the fictional stories are your favorite. (建议换成这句:I’m convinced is quite to your taste). Thirdly, there was Chinese culture in it, you can learn Chinese culture.
To sum up, I believe that you will love it while you read it.


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