KET/PET 写作参考范文系列终篇（42）
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梁老师 北京小升初老师～
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It was Jack's birthday and he was feeling very happy. He woke up to the smell of pancakes, his favorite breakfast treat. His parents had also planned a surprise party for him.
All his friends from school came, and they had a fantastic time playing games and eating birthday cake. The highlight of the party was when Jack opened his presents. His eyes lit up with joy when he saw the new bicycle he had been wishing for.
After everyone left, Jack spent the evening learning how to ride his new bike under the beautiful sunset. Tired but content, he realized this was his best birthday ever. His heart was full of gratitude for his loving family and friends. Despite his exhaustion, Jack was eager to see what adventures his new bike would bring. He was looking forward to tomorrow, knowing his seventh year was off to a great start.
范文2：
It was Jack's birthday and he was feeling very happy. The air was filled with excitement as he opened his presents, revealing an array of delightful toys. Suddenly, his eyes fell on a big, mysterious box. His heart pounded as he slowly unwrapped it. To his surprise, it was a telescope!
With a grin, Jack rushed to the balcony, setting up his new gift. He peered into the eye piece, and the night sky unfolded before him. Sparkling stars, the moon's craters, and distant planets came into view. Each sight was more mesmerizing than the last.
Suddenly, a shooting star streaked across the sky. Jack gasped, making a wish. His birthday ended with a cosmic spectacle, making it the best birthday he ever had. His telescope didn't just gift him the stars, it gifted him a passion for astronomy that would last a lifetime.
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